holy crap
Well, seeing that the flash had a 4.1x rating, i wasn't quite sure what to expect. Seeing it, i can understand why it was popular, but ultimately, can't agree.
Your flash is melodrama, plain and simple. It's slopply handled, completely ludicrous, and yet, most of the NG'er audience can relate to it. I'd be lying if i didn't admit that i would have certaintly given this movie a 5 had i seen it three or four years ago.
However, there's quite a bit about your narrative style which could use improvements. Your dialog between charcters is entirely unrealisitic. Your drawings and animation could use work, and the entire concept of the flash is ridiclious.
Now, it's not to say that the flash is bad. On the other hand, for what you attempted to do, create a movie which could appeal to the 12-15 year old crowd on newgrounds, you did terribly well. I can imagine without difficulty an emo boy crying while watching this. However, your impact is lost upon an older audience. You show potentional in this flash, and with some refinments, perhaps some colaborative script writing, you could put together something really great. But for now, it stands in my mind as a decent effort, but medicore flash animation.